If a person becomes a celebrity, then they will get all wrapped up in the fame life and forget about the people that love they the most. I think that having fame and fortune is not fun because a person can lose the people they love the most. Many people think having fame and fortune is a good thing, but really it's not if a person looks at it in a different way they can see many celebrities lose the people they love the most. Celebrities get all caught up in their work that they lose sight of their friends and family.
“If being a celebrity is so great why are so many of them so messed up?” Well being a celebrity can be great at some point...only if someone likes a lot of people,and likes getting their picture taken a lot, but also they get a lot of the attention. Fans and Photographers follow them around all of the time. They can’t stop to have coffee, go for a walk, or even go to the store without someone recognizing them and taking pictures. “She gets amazing perks, like free clothes from top designers, front-row seats at prestigious award shows, and trips around the world.” Just because a person get free things for being a celebrity, is not a good reason to become a celebrity. That person has to have the passion to be getting your picture taken 24/7 365+, and making movies,and being on T.V “Many celebrities don't have good behavior and are messed up doing stuff like getting arrested and drunk driving.” If you’re not smart and become a celebrity then you will end up doing stupid things like getting drunk, going to parties or even getting arrested. Making bad choices are not good,if you're going to be a celebrity then focus on your career,don’t be stupid and get in trouble. So in conclusion, in my point of view I wouldn’t want to be a celebrity because I don't want to lose the people I love the most and I wouldn’t want to to not be able to stop for coffee or go for walks without getting my picture taken 10,000,000 times.
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Mr. B
1/18/2017 07:08:50 am
You need a topic sentence for each paragraph and you don't have enough of your own elaboration in each paragraph.
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